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Delusion
by simon
A lady is confronted by the ghostly thought of her dead rabbit.
Comments
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Nathan Younger
the movement is awkward from the bunny dropping into the floating
Dalton Krajewski
The idea is very funny but unfortunately the characters are largely posed unrealistically. The girl's neck, especially, seems to be bent at a painful angle for the duration of her screen time, and Big Buck Bunny's arms pop strangely when he climbs down from the leaf. I think the staging and idea are solid, but some more attention to the poses and transitioning between them smoothly would really sell the idea to its fullest potential.
Anoop Soman
Need to improve...
Nick Doyle
I think the girl is quite good (like the hair animation) but the bunny seems too light especially when he is so big !
Carolyn Mennecke
There's a lot of swimminess in the motion - add more contrast between fast and slow. Also, use the girl's whole body to create a pose - not just the head!
Gabriel Areia
PERFECT