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Rejecting Mother`s Bread
by akashsingh
Description
I am 3d animation student working on 3d character animation i will be participate every month i looking for your valuable feedback
Comments
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James Choi
very floating and unnatural, shooting reference footage can help a lot
steven
Need to have the blond woman’s eyes not moving that much. Keep on practicing though
Yumeng Mortensen
Be careful with the knife around frame 80-86, it looks like her cut herself. I more like the acting of people on the right, she has her attitude there which is nice. Just double check her pupils, sometimes they're floating around not focusing on a spot.