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Post Principal and Parent Meet
I am an animation student and i choose 3d character animation as my specialization.So i will participate in every month 11 seconds club competition.And i'll be looking for the audience comments and guidelines.
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John M
Nice try but far too floaty
Sabrina
Way too much going on here... too distracting and the characters don't look connected. Don't rush through things
shawn
The character(s) are all over the place. Lock down your keys after your down telling your story telling poses so when you go to spline the model they want move so much.
steven
The characters move too much without purpose
Elisabeth Janerka
Very floaty animation. It's okay to keep the characters still, because this was just distracting to look at
yovicein
too much movement
Abhishek tiwari
Why are the characters moving so much ?
Lea
Sorry to say but your characters look drunk. Very, very unnatural amounts of movement going on here, maybe start shooting some reference and getting better story keys in place before moving on to full animation.