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Settle Down
A woman starts to get upset when she's told to settle down.
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Deven Ramesh Bhosale
good work.. may be i am wrong but the carrie should be a male as per the sound i feel.. but nice acting and lip syncing..
Jassmany Diaz-Butron
looks good i think.
to me the point i trying to hit really the feeling of the voice, sometimes u have it and looks good !
but for "oh tell him" i think it would need to be a bit more "intense". But yeah, just my point of view. It reads well though.
Maybe some steps around while talking would be cool, sometimes it looks a bit "glued to the ground"
In all the cases i like the shot. Congrats, respectully
Benjamin Berg
Nice work! Just a couple things.
1. Make sure you take a look at the eyebrows. They need more snap and small overlap.
2. The Malcolm character needs a lot of work. Staging and poses need a rework.