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crazy girl

by Jonathan Duret'glisse

Final Rating: 5.51. Finished #31 out of 173 entries.

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Experience

2 years as student

Time Taken

10 days

Description

A man don't understand his girl friend.

Comments

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Vinicius Correa

Just try to focus a little bit more on lipsync! Great job!

Rahul Rishikesh

a bit overacted...excess fluidity...but really good animation!

William Ramos

GREAT Gestural posing and exaggeration, but it seems like the phrasing was off from the audio

Andy Cheung

Some good timing and arcs. the emotion and poses could be stronger in places. Better eye contact between characters needed too.

Leonardo Pereira

You have good animation principles here, but your acting not match with the voice feeling. With your acting don't feel the suffering

Enrico Westley

I feel as though the beginning of this piece received more attention and love than the end. I absolutely LOVE the snappy transition of the girl!

Benjamin Berg

A couple big notes.
1. Who is she looking at (at frame 76)?
2. movements feel way too big at the beginning.