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TELL HIM
by Prasit Das
This is my first try in animation.. Hope you guys like it!! Enjoy....
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Adam Sirrelle
Something to think about is what is driving the body. For this i'd say the head. Try having the eyes moving at least 1 frame ahead of the head and the head 2 frames ahead of the body/upper torso. This'll give the movement more force, focus, and direction.
Also I feel like the eyeline is too low down for the character she's looking at. It might be that the head needs to be tilted higher.
Bryan Stone
Nice setting, smooth movement, even movement of the head and limbs.
Elizabeth Harding
from 93-105 she looks like she freezes and her end mouth pose looks a little odd.
Deven Ramesh Bhosale
better one..
i feel, you could have add one cam cut for souls act..
the carrie name feellike an girls name but if you hear a sound of it, it is a boy's voice what i feel..
best of luck...
Enrico Westley
Feels a bit floaty, but the lighting is a bit interesting.
Sarah Johnson
Work on pushing your facial expressions more. The lighting makes it difficult to see what's happening.
Jez
What is the reason for so dark scene ?