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Sad Little Girl

by Rémy

Final Rating: 4.83. Finished #64 out of 177 entries.

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Animator

Rémy

Experience

1 year, student in animation

Time Taken

About 20 days

Description

A little girl who is not happy where she lives

Comments

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Dina Mohy

lip-sync needs some adjustments, reduce eye movement a little

Michael Launder

everything is great, im not loving the throw! maybe it need some different spacing or timing applied

Dominic Rayner

Not sold with the acting. Some expressions seem out of place, for example the screwing up followed by the extreme raising of the eye brows, and the clutching of the stone to his chest just doesn't seem right. Apart from that the overall movement and lips is not perfect, but reasonably well done. The stone thrown looks like it pops from a contraint; the arm movement doesn't match the direction it is thrown.

Bryan Stone

Like this.

Poornachander Adepu

nice act! little more improvement