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Sad Little Girl
by Rémy
A little girl who is not happy where she lives
Comments
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Dina Mohy
lip-sync needs some adjustments, reduce eye movement a little
Michael Launder
everything is great, im not loving the throw! maybe it need some different spacing or timing applied
Dominic Rayner
Not sold with the acting. Some expressions seem out of place, for example the screwing up followed by the extreme raising of the eye brows, and the clutching of the stone to his chest just doesn't seem right. Apart from that the overall movement and lips is not perfect, but reasonably well done. The stone thrown looks like it pops from a contraint; the arm movement doesn't match the direction it is thrown.
Bryan Stone
Like this.
Poornachander Adepu
nice act! little more improvement





