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I miss my past.
by OrgMine
She hate this place. and she doesn't know how to solve the problems .
Comments
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Michael Launder
great use of key poses and moving between them! thats a huge plus in this animation!
Sarah Johnson
Not a bad start. I would try pushing the mouth shapes more and really make them obvious. The lipsync on this audio was the most crucial part I think, so you really need to make that as polished as possible.
Bryan Stone
Fair. Could be improved with better camera angles to enhance the emotion.
Antar Irvin
It just needs stronger mouth movements, then you really have something.
Eddie Mendez
pretty good body movements, the mouth could use more work though, right now it just looks like shes moving her jaw up and down only with very slight mouth shapes.
Dominic Rayner
A bit stiff, but getting there.