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Castle on a cloud

by George

Final Rating: 3.80. Finished #115 out of 177 entries.

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Animator

George

Experience

2-3 years

Time Taken

~12 hours (not including rendering)

Description

This animation was done with the Mery Rig.

Comments

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Hugo Daniel Gamboa

I think the camera movement is there just as a filler, there is no need for it.

Michael Launder

you have a good opportunity to showcase things like lip synch and acting, your camera is just pushed so far away! i cant see your animation very well. also look for things that are really floaty, like her screen left hand floats along the window for a ton of frames around 235. Find the key pose and NAIL it and the appeal will be there

David Alin

camera is too far from her

Dominic Rayner

Distracting camera move. Shame because it hides the character work. Hands slide too much.

Bryan Stone

why so far back?

andrzej

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