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Mery On a Plane

by Nick Trpkovski

Final Rating: 3.33. Finished #147 out of 177 entries.

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Animator

Nick Trpkovski

Experience

4 months

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Mery does not enjoy her job. Serving drinks to crying people all day, she dreams of a quieter place.

Comments

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Michael Launder

shoulder movements still feel stepped or linear, and the body language is very reflective of her attitude, a good boby mechanic will support dialoge without the mouth even moving

Bryan Stone

huh?

Thomas Thoma

I like your idea of the plane being her castle on the clouds as she is bullying the passenger. Thumbs up from me. Good one! However several of her mouth shapes (example: frames 168, 271) give me an "uncanny valley" feeling with this rig. I'm unsure what she's thinking/feeling as I can't read her expression.

Sabrina Winkel

I can't catch any of the story. Like what is the story

Dominic Rayner

Nice idea, but the animation is a bit mechanical and doesn't quite emote