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what's my line again?
by Ash Summers
She is auditioning for a musical but has trouble remembering the lyrics
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Rannva Macdonald Arnskov
At frame 112~, the right elbow pops weirdly. The work with the eyebrows is good, but could be stronger with some proper keyposes instead of slowly moving from one expression to the other.
At the end, the chest pops as well. If you still have the file, I would recommend searching for the key in the graph editor.
Michael Launder
nice key poses, next step is hitting them and holding then moving between them with follow throughs and spacing! also concentrate when you do lip synch on hitting the ups and downs of the jaw, if you get those perfect and then your wides and narrows at vowels. your lip synch will be about 90% perfect!
Mohamad Rezaei
So-so
Bryan Stone
Lipsync and polish needed.
Brandon Dunbar
Facial rig is good, though I don't feel like the emotions fit the situation. Animation is smooth, but I feel like it's very start-stop. I feel like she transitions too abruptly, taking away from the performance