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Buying some Tissues?
by J.J. Augusta
She is checking out a customer who is buying tissues and decides to start singing to them
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Rannva Macdonald Arnskov
They eyes are pretty dead. She doesn't look at anything specific, and feels very "dead". Neither sad or happy, but just bland and neutral. There are no key poses, everything is just inbetweens and nothing stands out over the rest. I think the animator would have done well with drawing the poses in 2D before starting the animation in 3D
Mohammad
those boxes have no waight
Michael Launder
relax the fingers on that left hand! it amost hurts just to look at haha
Eddie Mendez
hands are way to stiff and awkward. especially the left one not doing anything
nabil
ok
David Alin
she's having real coordination troubles there
Mohamad Rezaei
Lacks fundamentals
Bryan Stone
Creative idea, could be better with body movement tweaks.
Steve Hawthorne
I've done ten years of customer service. This one made me smile :)