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just a song
by david
poor people dont have opurtinities.
Comments
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Robert Firestone
Too far from the character.
Michael Launder
you have some nice posing but the video is squished and hard to see, concentrate on presentation next month!
Eddie Mendez
i dont get it, is the girl the one singing the song? her body movement doesnt seem to go with the audio.
David Alin
doesn't look bad animated but be careful with your presentation, I can't put more than 5 stars because it's so hard to read
J.K. Riki
You've got some great poses, but I have no idea what's going on story or character-wise. She just seems to be moving, without a lot of motivation. The movement that's there is very pretty, though, nice job on the easing in and out and such.
Michael Kristiansen
Wrong format. Shame, cause it looks okay to me otherwise.
Bryan Stone
Good, but is out of sync with sound.
Andrés Rosel
I believe perhaps the movements are a bit too exaggerated. She moves too much.
Antar Irvin
Lip syncing is a little off. You put a lot of work into the movements of the character, so I want to acknowledge that, but I dont think it matches the dialogue.
Kirby Drisdale
The animation is smooth, but I believe the characters movements are too fast for the way the dialogue feels. It doesn't seem to match the mood or with syncing.