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LOVELY DAUGHTER!!
by Amrithraj
The Daughter is so sad, and her mother try to make her happy..
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Hugo Daniel Gamboa
I think you took to much inspiration from tangled, but overall i think the poses should be refined.
Naman Aafle
Reminds me of a shot from "Tangled".
Mouth shapes are bit off.
Rannva Macdonald Arnskov
The strongest point is the second characters eyemovement. The poses are odd, and the singing characters face is stuck in a smug Dreamwork-face. Even when you're smiling, if you speak, you can't keep the smile form of your mouth to get most of the sounds out.
Michael Launder
you have a lot of principles! i love all the key poses! next steps are the inbetweens and going from there with follow throughs!
Melanie Fumey
Seems you've "copied" an animation of the Tangled movie ( Mother knows best sequence) but don't understand the interest or link with the sound of this month...
Huanyu Zhang
Copy Rapunzel animation
Mohamad Rezaei
Lacks fundamentals
Bryan Stone
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Dominic Rayner
Your shadows hide the lip synch and are distracting. The lip synch doesnt really vary enough. The actions seems wrong for the occasion. I wouldn't think the singer would yank someone by the head for a line such as this. Parts of this are heading in a nice animation direction, even if the actions don't fit the dialogue, so well done on that account.