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Very Angry Mery
by Dustin Jones
Not a lot, but hope to be good one day.
Two very long painful weeks
Mery walks up a set of stairs and plucks a flower from a flower pot. she then crushes it and throws it over a balcony.
Comments
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Dina Mohy
you can slow her moves a little, start squeezing the flower at frame 232 when she says not in a castle and there is no need for the hair adjustment move. the last expression is more of an angry than miserable .
Michael Launder
really look at walks, the walk here is pretty janky and has lots of trouble rotating the hips and shoulders. it feels pretty stiff
Dominic Rayner
Too much action with unrefined animation. What was she angry about, and why take it out on a flower?
Bryan Stone
Love the emotion and expression changes.
Steve Hawthorne
why go so angry at the end...?
Yes, I can see you need to improve the mechanics, but the staging worked nicely.