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Side kick

by Razam Ali

Final Rating: 5.96. Finished #10 out of 70 entries.

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Animator

Razam Ali

Experience

2.5

Time Taken

One week

Description

Over smart peoples ,

Comments

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Leonardo Pereira

The beginning in your animation is nice in the cartoony style, but I think don´t follow the bit of the audio and dialogue. The lip sync looks off.

Gull

Pretty good...too much movement going on I feel...not match sound.

James Harkonnen

all looks fine, needs better facial acting

Prashant Makwana

Good!

Yagizhan Misirli

Maybe other things should have come first but I have a technical criticism. The lip sync is a bit far from the sound. The human character needs more clear mouth shapes I think. Have a good work :)

Brian Rusnak

Nice work! I like the gestures and movement of the first character as he steps into the room and shuts the door.

I think some of his head movements need some more inbetweens on the line "..crime lab" at frame 39.

Nice work!

Eddie Higgenbottom

This one is my favorite. 7up puts the 7 in spicy foods.

Florian Linet

the animation looks nice but it doesn't fit the tone of the audio in my opinion