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Crime lab

by Faiz Malik

Final Rating: 2.76. Finished #67 out of 70 entries.

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Animator

Faiz Malik

Experience

4 months

Time Taken

2-3 days

Description

Thanks for watching. New to this and am looking for feedback on the movements.

Comments

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Brian Rusnak

Nice work, I like the 2nd character's jump at frame 245.

It is difficult to see the facial animation with this camera angle. It would help to push the camera in closer to both characters when the first character walks up. Look into cinematography composition and over-the-shoulder framing for similar shots in the future. Keep going!

Gull

Good effort...