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What to say to the kids
by Andrew Pu
I was imagining the kids escaping the house so they could buy something without realising they need money and the main character trying to think how to tell them this, initially ignoreing fact they threaten him with a knife. I hope you enjoy my animation!
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kevin scott
Great job. One thing I would do it tighten up the lip sync. It feels soft compared to the body animation.
Joshua Morley
Each pose is clear, and executed nicely! Lip sync looked offset too much?
Ben Zingo
some really nice contrast between smooth and static movement, but maybe try exaggerating some of the curvature/rotation in the chest. Having more bending forward/backward would help sell the movement more, and add some character.
The eyebrow acting is really strong too.
Overall, great work, just feel like it could be exaggerated/pushed further!
Side note, the background scene looks too low? Maybe your character is too big/tall in comparison
J.K. Riki
You've got some amazing poses and beautiful little subtle touches in this, so well done on that! One of the best I've seen in the voting so far.