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The mouse and the cheese

by Ricz Zsófia

Final Rating: 5.41. Finished #27 out of 75 entries.

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Animator

Ricz Zsófia

Experience

I am an animation student.

Time Taken

I did it for 2 days.

Description

The mouse and the cheese talk in an awkward situation.

Tags
2D

Comments

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Richard Clark

Interesting idea!

It seems you repeated the motion of the mouse but altering the arms on each motion. I would try to avoid doing that.

I would suggest learning the simple "bouncing ball" exercise to start understanding the basics of animation. As well as the "flour sack" exercise to understand the spine and hips/root movement.

Lip sync is off and needs improvement. At times it's a bit ambiguous.