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Couple
by Velid
Two creatures explore deep thoughts.
Thanks to my love Klea for decorating the frames and drawings when I was not looking!
Comments
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Richard Clark
Good effort!
This looks like a test, but I want to mention things that stick out to me.
I would like to see some body in there instead of just the floating heads but maybe you didn't have time or didn't want to hassle with that.
Lip sync is off and needs improvement. It's a bit ambiguous.
Timing with ease ins and outs can improve.
Composition needs improving. What you have is not very interesting.
Joshua
I would have liked to see the finished project
Antonio Marulevski
Probably unfinished, but the expressions are very deep and the design is original
Alen Burazerovic
Nice, just add the rest of the body, and finish it:)