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Hammer

by elizabeth

Final Rating: 4.60. Finished #88 out of 200 entries.

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Animator

elizabeth

Experience

2 years

Time Taken

5 days

Description

n/a

Comments

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Erich W Bomke

The animation and render look nice, but the lipsync could use some work.

Robert Tighe

I love the inquisitive head tilt @37ish.
Really good job. It's too bad the lip synch was not finished.

Kristin Turnipseed

Looks good, but the lip sync could use a little work

Carolina Camacho

The mouth movement was weird on the second guy, but everything else is awesome.

Sean

Just sync up the lips and mouth movement and you will have a very strong animation.

David Alexander

decent motion but the lipsync is quite off

Christoffer Andersen

You have some really nice poses and a nice setup overall. But you should work more with what is happening between your key poses. Namely the breakdowns. Pay more attention to ease ins/outs.
But nice work!

Spencer Barber

I think this one is pretty good! besides the lip movements..
The body mechanics felt natural, just a little slow. I think it just needs some tweaking in the graph editor to help it feel a little less floaty.

April Slocombe

Lip sync, especially on Bill, could do with a bit more work otherwise good poses and animation.

Stafford Ahartz

lip sync is off by a few frames.

Sergio Barragan L

great, but need more lip sync

[user]

try another pass on the lip sync, then you could really nail it