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Adequatulance Strikes Back

by Kyle Evangelist

Final Rating: 4.60. Finished #88 out of 200 entries.

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Animator

Kyle Evangelist

Experience

two months

Time Taken

one week

Description

Secrets live in all of us. Some are bigger and more dangerous than others.

Comments

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Robert Tighe

HA, you used that weird hum at the beginning. This starts out nicely and kind of dies off at the end. It could have been resolved with him dropping the light saber of some other gag...Good work.

Hadi Daher

Animation looks good, but I think the render ruined the overall look of this one - I would have put in a background or something to offset the darkness of the background so that the character didn't just look like a floating head and hands.

April Slocombe

Two things that could be improved here - one: a lighter background would have worked best and two, the man on the left walks in a floaty way. Other than these points, I like the light saber opening and Bill moving his head downwards when he says, "adequatulance."

Steve Legate

LOL

Genevieve Powzun

Really great use of the sound effects through the dialogue!