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Bill! (In Space!)
My first ever animation, hope you enjoy 7 and a half seconds of pure hopeless drawing!
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Borislav Dimitrov
Mate this is not the place to show your stupid ideas.
kishan Rathod
funny !! good JOb !~
J.K. Riki
It's not a terrible idea, but the execution needs a ton more work. Animation (in spite of what it's become these days) is not just moving mouths and still characters. It's about giving life to the drawings on screen. This needs a lot more life. Start by tossing the lip sync entirely and get some real movement in there. Then, when the rest is fantastic, THEN add the lip sync. It's the icing on the cake. Right now we're missing the cake. :) Good luck with future entries!
April Slocombe
While the characters look static, I like the lip sync and blinks on the first man while the tentacle through the astronaut explains why the animation may not be suitable for children.
Tadeusz Ciborowski
the payoff was good. The crude quality kind of added to it. :D
Vijith
Make the first character step back .his expressions are limited.