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Mr Adaquatulance!

by Steph Halsall

Final Rating: 4.30. Finished #101 out of 200 entries.

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Animator

Steph Halsall

Experience

5 weeks

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Bill hates his adequate job and his boss!

Comments

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John-Michael

Love his flinch!

Derek Stewart

While the mood is coming across, this is lacking some real appeal. It's tough to marry boredom or the mundane with the notion that you want to have an entertaining shot. But try incorporating some more dynamic poses, like, for example, leaning the mean heavily on his free hand and playing up the boredom with big eye-rolls. You could really push the cartoony sarcasm in this.

Christof

I like his reaction when he hears the other guy start to talk.

April Slocombe

Movement is minimal yet natural while the lip sync and facial expressions are equally as good.