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Office Adequance !!
An office co-worker finds something unusual !!
Comments
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Robert Tighe
Feel VERY pose-to-pose. I like the snappy timing. This feels unfinished.
Jayvon Gomes
Focus more on the lip sync
Vardan Galstyan
Too many gestures
April Slocombe
Apart from the unneeded gap of silence halfway through, the animation, poses, facial expressions and lip sync are all good.
philipp seis
congrats. Technically not bad in terms of animation principles. Your're using takes, accents, you are trying to be smooth and subtle not to overact and so forth, but your performance could match the scene better. Slightly too technical, but on a good way. Rock on !
[user]
1st character looks great, but I think you lost it on the second one. nice work!