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I Wish I Wasn't Bill

by Lindsey Helland

Final Rating: 3.22. Finished #174 out of 200 entries.

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Animator

Lindsey Helland

Experience

3 weeks

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

Bill is a dead-end job working for a boss he despises. Bill is on his last warning and has to put on a happy face to the Boss-man so he doesn't get fired for having a poor attitude.

Comments

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Yuri Marcel Vieira

seems like it need some polish

Jarell Pryor

The main poses are there but it is stiff and feels unfinished.

Valentious Williams

wats going on?>

Borislav Dimitrov

there are only hands and head movements. where is the body. use reference and study it. if you want to be better.

Lee

Your facial animation is great but the hands/arms are not. Try filming some reference and spend some time getting life-like hand gestures in there

April Slocombe

While there is no design actually being stamped on the paper and Bill's movements are rapid and excessive just before the other man speaks, his poses, lip sync and facial expressions are fine as is the rest of the animation.