What I learnt at Scout Camp

Ben Hopper

I think this one could be great if the animation gets another couple of polish passes. At the start, his acting is a bit off, but it ends nicely.

Brent Forrest

Nice idea but your staging could ahve been a bit more clear. Did you storyboard your ideas first?

Paula Decanini

If you want the character to squat down, have him go all the way down on the heel and balance on the toe. The pose you have looks awkward.

Sandra Tapia

I love the idea of the scene. When he says " It's a circle, you could probably have used his right hand to show the circle.

Ejen Shafiq Isa

nice setting :) itll be nicer if theres more contrasting poses to the performance.

ratna

i think...if the torch would have been lit near frame 330 .....then it would b much better .....
nice concept and setup :)