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The Alien with the Stash
by Sara Babbitt
An alien offers his advice.
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James Trimm
some really nice follow through blocked out there!
Steve Schwartz
Looking really good. Would have liked to see more inbetweens at the end of each phrase.
Sarah Johnson
Good start. Could use more acting and action happening during the dialogue pauses.
Jess Giaquinto
Practice moving holds/subtle movements so that the character isn't completely motionless between pieces of dialogue. You may also want to consider drawing the rest of the figure through the waist/knees, so that we can understand what action he's doing that moves his location onscreen so much.
ben malberg
You know from f0-f65 it's pretty good, but then I feel it's lacking a lot of in-betweens. I like the alien concept though, and the hand gestures. I might try thinking of another way to use my hand gestures other then the literal expression of the dialogue. (ex: pointing to himself when he says 'us') Nice drawing skills though.
Brent Forrest
You need way more breakdowns dude 4.
Sandra Tapia
Very rich on body poses and facial expressions. Love it!