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Elitism
by HZ Li
It's meat to be about a teacher talking to his whole A class.
Comments
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Joel Murphy
great job keying, but the keys were a bit too exaggerated to believe. cheers.
Robert Huffmon
I love the body movement and the camera, this would have been pretty awesome if the lip sync was much more accurate though. Nice job!
Wilson
184 bad
MartyB
too much camera movement and it's too quick for the dialogue
James Trimm
There's some nice animation in there - the camera just moves a bit too much:)
Yuri Marcel Vieira
although nice executed, it's a bit overacted
Paula Decanini
I like that you're really pushing the exaggeration, but it doesn't match the tone of the dialogue at all. Subtlety can be expressive too.
Evelyn Hernandez
I would think about how much you really want to exaggerate these poses. the dialogue is very mono tone which in subtle ways you can still keep it interesting without the extreme wild poses.
Mervyn Le MandarinOrange
Needs to have a more natural act.
Vin Liew
The overall animation is good, but i dont think it suit the VO.The action is abit too strong and fast for the VO.
Dorian SILVESTRE
Sandra Tapia
Very nice gestures. I think that camera was moving so fast.