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Zombie Hotel

by Gil Daniel

Final Rating: 6.01. Finished #12 out of 206 entries.

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Animator

Gil Daniel

Experience

few years

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

The game characters are alive

Comments

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ben malberg

Very nice poses and movement. Appealing! It's also quite funny how he doesn't lose his expression when grabs the zombie. Great acting there. The mouth animation didn't really add much to this, I would go in there and carve out some stronger poses with the mouth. Especially when the camera backs away on 'it's a sphere..'. The zoom out in the end to the arcade game is a cool idea, I think it was a bit jarring though. I was lost after the first time I watched it. Is there a way to explain the story more clearly through the action? Anyway nice work on this, smooth.

Angeline

very good characters!!

Amartya Mukherji

very nice animation. But the black gloves in dark BG is eating up a lot of your animation. The hand looks cut. I believe you could have got more stars with the same animation, if you had a clear presentation. Now most of your acting,- is not readable enough.

Paula Decanini

I'd like to see a strong pose on "eternity", and maybe have him looking up and around too much. But still a pretty good job!

Steve Schwartz

Really nice concept! One thing to think about, his black gloves kinda disappear in the BG. Maybe up the contrast a bit.

rahul rishikesh

nice concept! good job

Sandra Tapia

Very cool idea. Love it!