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His Dimension
by Drew Covert
Strange guy talks about strange stuff
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Ben Hopper
I think this one needs a bit more love on the facial animation side. Good acting though.
Wilson
Synchronize sounds
Vin Liew
i like the characters!
Mike Calhoun
Great work. The concept of him talking out the side of his mouth is well executed, but having specific mouth shapes on "sphere" and "diMension" would have made this super solid.
Nishith
u missed the secondary sound in between the dialogue..i liked the rest..
Paula Decanini
When he almost get the bottle to his lips, it feels awkward. He pulls away too fast, and his lips look too puckered, as if for a kiss. Try to make it more loose and casual. Also, mouth corners don't go in and out enough for the mouth shapes.
Joyce Makker
the simulation makes this look even better. Good job on the overall animation too though!
ratna
nice presentation...lip sync could be better
Jessica Flanagan
weird flickering on the hair...
ben malberg
Nice work on this. Poses and transitions looked smooth. The bottle hand off was great. A couple of things, it looks like he was drinking from the bottle although it wasn't touch his lips. At the end we lose eye contact around f345.
Sandra Tapia
Very nice facial expressions and hand gestures.
Ruth Agada
I love the acting! Very cool!
Steve Kimbrey
Nice. I think you hit the "it's a circle" a little soon. The swig from the bottle probably could've happened in a slightly longer pause. Or if you were going for a "I'm going to swig but I need to talk first" kinda thing I would probably keep the bottle a little further away from his mouth. It looks like he's just missed a sip rather than changed his mind on sipping.