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Dimensional Theory
A man is explaining the m-theory to another guy, are they part from other dimension? are we?..
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Joel Murphy
too gestural I'd say, don't take thins so literal. Nice animation otherwise.
Jordan Campbell
The speaker's movements seem really erratic and quick - it doesn't seem to fit with the slow pace of the monologue. The idea is cool though.
David Krein
This is tough, I want to like it, but the motions are far too jerky. I can see what you were going for with the more insane pose at the end, but it's too jarring.
Brent Forrest
This is bananas
Vin Liew
In my opinion,too many key posses.Need to be smoother .
ben malberg
Interesting concept with the zoom out of the computer monitor at the end. Original main character. I think the mechanics are too fast and popping in some places (around f170 on the screen R elbow). Slow it down a bit. The secondary character's expression is gold.
Benjamin Osei Boateng
Too Snappy
Paula Decanini
You tried to fit way too many ideas into a few seconds. Watch out for overanimating.
Steve Schwartz
Not quite sure I get the ending. Also, the main character is moving around way way too much. It's a very slow and methodical piece of audio and the movement should match it.
Joyce Makker
Toooooooo much movement
Ben Hopper
Really jerky movement in the performance. Hard to see past it.
Sandra Tapia
Nice concept and facial expressions.
Marcello Acevedo
Movements seem a little to fast