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Student
by Ernie Chen
Description
Waiter gets frustrated at the customer's choices. My first 11 Second Club.
Comments
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Adrian Winchell
Seems alright, but the character is holding too much - we don't have another shot to keep the scene active so he should be reacting more. I don't think it's particularly natural to hold both arms above the table that long either.
Lucas Donaldson
Some of these movements are pretty good. "what about the sausage?"
Some of the movements feel rather blended together so it extracts from the realism.
Sabrina Winkel
I loved his hand gestures and when he face palmed