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Vegetarian
Tried to improve from January, thanks for C & C, would appreciate more feedback. PS. I forget to comment during the voting period, but I read all the comments and try to improve
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Adrian Winchell
Just a note on the lipsync - add in the mouth width. All your "no"s are nearly as wide as your "eats". From 99-133, seems like you've deleted a hold key or something - the model's just gradually drifting to a new pose.
Vittorio
Miss a lot of acting
Robert Zhou
Great job! Sometimes your character makes very sudden movements that are distracting (ex: he suddenly stops after saying I'm a vegetarian). Otherwise, looks very nice!
Antoine Boel'
You might want to explore more variations on mouth shapes / asymmetry