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No Meat!

by Ahmed Jackson

Final Rating: 3.50. Finished #161 out of 231 entries.

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Animator

Ahmed Jackson

Experience

11 Years

Time Taken

1 Hour

Description

It's about two friend that are talking about eating food in Meat Restaurant.

Comments

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Eric Raffle

in your shot there is too much motion and not enough realism or even thought as to why he is doing that motion, remember that every motion you do must have a reason and purpose to be there.

Adrian Winchell

"What is wrong with you?" - "Well I had all my spinal vertebrae removed." - Don't just throw the head around, go for actual poses! XD Even a toony model like this could use more subtle animation.

Lucas Donaldson

I like the extravagance of movement, but the lip sync could use a little work.

Richard Adams

Body and head movements, really well done! Facial expressiveness and lip-syncing are...decent but not as good.

Alissar Kobeissi

no thought process

Ramsey Parks

The way they move their heads is just weird.

Aanal Kumar

hahahahaha!!!! nice head movement man!!!!

Robert Zhou

Great animation style!