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Picky Wolf
by Taryn Sabra
Two wolves discuss their lunch.
Comments
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Joaquin Casas
Nice idea.
The tail and the different actions stop suddenly.
sonia
That's super cute!!!!
is that Balto???
Eric Raffle
not bad but you needed better paw gestures they were too stiff
Adrian Winchell
Tells the story okay, but needs more emotive poses and expressions for these characters to really start to act. Maybe don't freeze them so much between actions?
Richard Adams
Liked your concept, but animation needs polishing. Very floaty. But aspects of this are terrific, especially the brown wolf hanging his head in shame at the end.
Moby
Nice concept. Camera move could be smoothed out a little.