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dinner
by Biren patel
participate for test my skill of animation. this is my second work of 11 second. guys plz give comment for any need to required
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Lucas Donaldson
Some good starts but doesnt quite look finished. Its a little hard to tell what the background character was doing in the pause in dialogue.
Adrian Winchell
That is one talented trumpet player, making it sound like a violin - and all without ever pursing his lips to an embouchure. Calm down and ease the torso tilts, they bounce a it too much. Otherwise pretty good!
Richard Adams
Extremely well done. My only quibble, background musician is rather distracting. Attention needs to stay in the foreground. One of the best entries so far this month.
Joep de Laat
too much is happening, of which most is not related or supporting to the story...