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No Meat
by Joas
Animator
Experience
About a year as a student; no professional experience.
Time Taken
Several weeks, in between other projects.
Description
Dorm frenemies clash over food.
Comments
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Adrian Winchell
Seems like the pillow should keep tumbling not just stick to the side of the frame after it's been thrown. Since you opted to light and render this, a fill light behind the camera to bring out the details in their faces would have been nice.
Evan Helford
It started out nice with the camera angle and the poses. However, as the shot went on, it felt like the poses got less solid and the animation seemed more floaty. I was also confused by the food he grabbed out of mid-air.