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i don't eat meat
by Nhi Hoàng
he is an awkward vegetarian
Comments
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Paul David Panganiban
Needs extreme poses.
Léo Miche
Cool. The shoulders are a bit stiff though.
Alice Reeve
Good start. I think you could use a little more body language, like with his hands for example.
Lea
You're staying in the disgusted pose throughout the entire scene and it gets a little dull after the first couple of beats. It's a good expression, but mix it up a little.
Adrian Winchell
Since we're just staring at one character for 11 seconds, it'd be nice if he actually moved his body a bit more in reaction to what he's saying and hearing, rather than just sitting stock still.
Lucas Donaldson
Starts of looking great. I feel, towards the end, his movements of his mouth and his movements of his body and head are disconnected. and at the end, his head moves quickly then slowly. over all though, looks good!





