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What is wrong with you?
by Saniya Pawar
Description
This is my first animation.
Comments
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Adrian Winchell
The poses could be quite a bit stronger in the long shot, and I was afraid you weren't going to move anything when I was watching the closeups. Not sure what you're animating this in, but could use some more facial angle movement during the actions, especially the closeups.
S J Bennett
Love the hand on the shoulder at the end. Aww. :)
Joep de Laat
I get what you're trying to say, but to be straight forward, your animation just needs work. But with practice and time you'll get there ;)
Vittorio
i like the last movement of the giraffe





