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S'mores
1 year as a student
70~80 hrs. 2-3 hours a day for the entire month.
2 foxes in a forest discussing dinner options.
Rigs used:
- Deer by John Vassallo
- Foxes by Daniel Moos
- Chicken by [email protected]
- AnimSchool Malcolm
Comments
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Adrian Winchell
It's an alright concept, but your camera work is all over the place, and you don't really have much more than initial blocking in for the characters. There's not really even any lipsync here, just jawflaps.
Jyreme Mcmillon
Overall I think the idea is there but I think some time could be spent cleaning up some of the animation...adding eases where appropriate and adjusting the spacing and arcs etc.. also I think the staging could be strengthened in a couple of the shots as they are kinda confusing...I do like the acting from the animals though.
Kendra Kaye Coffey
Some good starts but action needs more follow through.