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Green is Mean,Red is better Dead

by Elvin

Final Rating: 3.04. Finished #199 out of 231 entries.

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Animator

Elvin

Experience

Student - total noob.

Time Taken

2 days.

Description

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Comments

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Eric Raffle

too far away and way too bright, cant see a thing properly

Adrian Winchell

Camera's a little far away to read this scene, you're not doing much with the legs, a medium shot would have worked better. Maybe slow down and anticipate the pantomimes a bit more?

Yogesh Paradkar

why it act like Charlie Chaplin In between?????????

Tafrey Mongkuo

Play around with the rig more. He's very fun to work with but right now you're afraid to push for more full body expressions. Don't make him so stiff and get him moving!

Sabrina Winkel

He just stands there I would have him holding out a plate of meat or something

Kendra Kaye Coffey

Action is stiff. 280 mark felt awkward because it was so stiff.