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No Meat
by Angell
Rough rough Polish Pass.
Comments
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Adrian Winchell
Just needs more - more poses, more accent, more emotion, more everything. Nothing particularly sticky-outy, the basics are there, just need to spend more time giving the characters their acting.
Joep de Laat
your camera does not focus on the active character, in the first shot you focus on the red man while he does not do a lot, while the blue man talks and moves and is not in focus. also switching a pose in a cut does not work with the continuity
Sabrina Winkel
I like how the red guy touched his head at the end and love the acting
Kendra Kaye Coffey
When he lifts the chickens they seem weightless.





