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Vegetarian

by Nathaniel Litvintchouk

Final Rating: 3.37. Finished #178 out of 231 entries.

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Experience

Student (Close to 4 years)

Time Taken

About a day (on and off)

Description

Some people just don't understand vegetarians...

Comments

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Alice Reeve

Nice body language, but I think the guy with the menu is floating around too much.

Adrian Winchell

I see where you're going with this, but there's a lot of work on the timing and arcs needed here; the carnivore's drifting like he's drunk or on a ship at sea.

Léo Miche

The character is moving too much between your keyposes. Keep the "stay alive" animation more subtle.

Lucas Donaldson

I like when he wacks the guy on the head. Maybe give more build up to the wack?

Robert Zhou

Just an acting note, why does he look at the menu while he's thinking? Nice woork