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You're A Whaaa?
by Justin Jones
My first 11 second club entry!
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AR Bullock
Love this! The style is great, the "Marco's Meat" setting begs the question of why the vegetarian is there and makes the conversation extra amusing, and the shopkeeper's face on "What about the sausage?" is hilarious! The only thing that feels off to me is the way the vegetarian changes poses between the first and second shots we see of him...
David Ramirez
haha I love the expressions and movements/poses.
The lip-sync is too fast to read though.
I think it would be good to see just one or two frames for the transition to sausage pose, was a bit too quick.
Richard Adams
Very well drawn. Some timing issues, butcher's body feels quite stiff.
Alissar Kobeissi
Fun style of animating
Yogesh Paradkar
woooooo
what was That?????????
snapppppp----
Lipsync-----snappp
not good
S J Bennett
Very entertaining lipsync in this but it zips by so quickly!
Joep de Laat
fun designs and style, static acting without much body language... I understand that's partially style based, but some movements don't go together with what is said and feel like tricks.
Adrian Winchell
Awesome that you've done 2D here! I feel the motions are too fast and broad for the short time they're visible. It would be nice if, instead of your exterior shot, you'd provided an establishing shot showing the characters' positions relative to one another. It looks like they could be in two totally unrelated locations the way they're set up now.
Niklas Bergwall
Lol, love the style!
Ramsey Parks
The lip sync is off a lot, but I like your style.
Lucas Donaldson
Nice individual movements. though, I'm not sure how they all fit together and go with the dialogue.
Sabrina Winkel
The characters close their eyes too much. I would try to fix that and when the character holds his finger up and smiles... And frowns again. It doesn't look too realistic.





