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Nominal games
by Garry Botha
A father tries to communicate to his son about a game.
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Dieguito Pritchett
Dead facial expressions in both. Keep working
guven sahinkanat
I liked timing of main poses but if father character had eye blinks (at least him) , expressions could be more meaningfull .eye parts improvable part of your animation.
Anais Larocque
The idea and the poses were good, but the characters' whole bodies should always be moving at least a little since they're alive and breathing. :)
James Cavanaugh
FACES! even if it's just tiny motions, blinks, etc. get them in there. general posing and physicality works well, watch your overlaps!
Subham Das
body is dead maximum time
Samuel Couffe
I like your poses, mabe think about the moving holds when your characters don't move, it wil bring a lot of life to your shot ! And maybe play a bit more with the expression, but that's a great shot keep going :)