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Lonely Bar
by Riley Horne
Here's one of my first animations I've seen through until the end. This includes setting up a scene and lighting it, as well as actually rendering the animation. I hope you like it!
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Travis Wong
you should probably focus more on the character animation more than your camera ^^
Cory Parks
Lighting is nice, but where is the party?
Chris Tarrant
Some very un-natural camera movements there. Try to mimic how a camera would move in real life. Often it's better to keep it stationary.
Meme Candia
el movimiento de la cámara es extraño, no es realmente beneficioso
Jesse Angri
You should really not animate the camera unless you have a good reason to. I don't understand what you were trying to do there.
ben malberg
It's a nice set and lighting. I think there's too much camera movement. I would bring the camera closer and focus more on the poses and body mechanics of the character. I like your idea to have her fall at the end.
Jez
A nice try with those camera moves but no cigar
Les Watters
I would not have moved the camera at all!
Sarah Johnson
Focus on animating the character instead of the camera!