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Solitary

by Toponetone

Final Rating: 2.42. Finished #161 out of 179 entries.

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Animator

Toponetone

Experience

3 years

Time Taken

2 weeks on and off

Description

Prisoner longs to get out.

Comments

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john

synch kinda off, very scary animation

ben malberg

I like the camera sweep in the beginning, and the lighting is super cool. The animation needs some work though. Interesting idea.

Jesse Angri

Impressive render, but you should really work on that after you have good animation.

Justin Jones

Please, no seizure inducing visuals. It distracts too much from how the animation actually looks.

David Borja

Awesome setting! However the face looks very stuck. In a sequence when you're focusing so much on the characters face, you need it to feel human. Keep practicing!

Amartya Mukherji

was this a horror movie?

Animation seems to be very weak. Lacks fundamentals

Nadia Ammari

the lip sync is really bad

Moby

Lighting is too distracting.