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Swan Con
A nervous swan attempts to outwit a hunter with a "clever" disguise.
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Michael Launder
good cut on action! the staging here is working great! the mouth shapes here feel a bit subtle, maybe some more narrows and exageration in the opening shapes could help bring it to life
Nassim Briedj
hhhhh very funny
Daniel
I like the story, but the poses and interpolation need some work. The facial movements, for example, seem to really disconnect from the words at times.
Jessica "Jess" Jerome
very nice idea
Samidha Kumar
nice idea but work on the anim principles
pankaj kushwaha
good work keep it up :)
Megan Huggins
Love the idea!
Kirby Drisdale
I absolutely love your idea! All that was needed was a bit more cleanup to make the hunters movements smoother.
Gavin
I loved the end frame with the smug smile