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The Hunting Ground

by David Jordan Cox

Final Rating: 4.87. Finished #46 out of 142 entries.

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Animator

David Jordan Cox

Experience

1 Year

Time Taken

2 Weeks

Description

Two hunters go out to find a rare species of bird.

Comments

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pankaj kushwaha

good work keep it up :)

Lea

The thing that jumps out at me is that the guy on the right's hand is twisted completely to hold the gun. Maybe look up reference on how to hold a rifle. The animation itself is decent, but the lipsync could do with another pass.

Michael Launder

nice key poses and follow throughs!

Jay Jörg Smith

Nice little story you invented to that audio file. Overall animations look fine :) The last step of the right person looks a bit strange. Also the left one is doing to much movement in a short amount of time, but I like the posings :)

William Harrison

The wrist of the rig on the right is broken, if you look at someone hold a gun the fingers should be where you have the palm. Other than that and a few minor fixes It looks good.